高二英语作文

国家广电总局下发了"限广令",看法和想法 Opinions and Ideas 命题作文

写作任务:
国家广电总局下发了"限广令",规定自2012年1月1日起,全国各电视台播出电视剧时,每集电视剧中间不得再以任何形式插播广告。请你结合以下图片,用英语写一篇短文展开讨论。注意:1. 可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;2. 词数120-150;3. 参考词汇:剧集episode,插入insert。写作分析:一审体裁:
本次写作任务要求写一篇图片议论文。同学们要结合图片内容展开议论。二审结构:
根据本次写作任务的要求,我们可以分为三部分来展开写作。首先,描述图片内容,引出写作话题,并明确表达自己的观点,即支持"限广令"。第二段给出足够的论据支持论点,即表明你支持这一政策的原因,如广告影响看剧心情、广告大多粗制滥造等。尾段,总结全文,重申论点。三审必备表达:1. We can see from the pictures that, in November 2011, a family were very upset about advertisements being shown during TV dramas, while, in January 2012, the family were very happy to enjoy TV dramas without advertisements.2. This phenomenon can be explained by a policy that has been issued to stop advertisements from being shown in the middle of TV dramas from January 1st, 2012. It is a good policy for TV drama fans.3. It is much better to be able to see a whole episode of a TV drama without being disturbed by advertisements. Then people can fully enjoy the fun of TV dramas.4. Stopping advertisements during TV dramas will also help to avoid wasting people’s time.5. To conclude, this policy helps to improve the quality of entertainment that people can enjoy in daily life.

范文:

The two pictures show that people were disturbed by the inserted advertisements when they watch TV dramas in November 2011 while they were no longer annoyed by them in January 2012. That is because the government has issued a policy to limit advertisements during one episode of a TV series from January 1st, 2012. Personally, I am in favour of this policy.

Firstly, when we are completely absorbed in a TV series, especially at the crucial moment of a story, it is annoying that advertisements suddenly appear. It can ruin our enjoyment of TV programmes. Secondly, in terms of a good play, it should not be interrupted by anything else that may harm its beauty of art. Last but not least, most advertisements are carelessly made with poor qualities, making us feel bad.

To sum up, it is a practical policy which enjoys vast support.

亮点展示:

1. 结构完整,内容齐全。首段描述图片内容,确立论点:The two pictures show that... Personally, I am in favour of this policy. 第二段逐条陈述论据:Firstly, when we are completely... Secondly, in terms of a good play... Last but not least, most advertisements... 尾段作总结,重申论点:To sum up, it is a practical policy which enjoys vast support. 2. 衔接词的运用使文章层次分明:firstly,secondly,last but not least和to sum up。3. 高级词汇的使用提高了文章的档次:in favour of,be absorbed in和in terms of。4. 复杂句式的运用增加了文章的得分点。表语从句:That is because... ;名词性从句:it is annoying that advertisements suddenly appear.定语从句:... by anything else that may harm its beauty of art. / ... practical policy which enjoys vast support.

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